Figured I'd at least warn people in case they're squeamish...
Sooooo, two things. First is the...interesting phrasing used to describe her wings and stuff. purple veins and whatnot. Not that bad, but I hadn't noticed it before.
Second, this is the part I mentioned you should look out for (without actually telling you what to look for). Yes, first he swore off meat a book or two ago, then it was "if absolutely necessary" or maybe even "well, a little bit isn't that bad" kind of situation, and now this. This HAS to be intentional for some reason; there is no way PaoPao couldn't notice this after making such a huge deal about the vegetarian thing. Anyway...
Tying back to your comment about meat and homosexuality or gender...issues, possibly latent in the character: he's going on about a thick juicy piece of meat in his mouth, with its...juices dribbling down his chin. Again, perhaps it's nothing, although given the vegetarian thing, there is a lot of attention being drawn to it. But combined with your meat = male possibility, especially after the purple-vein prose... *shudder* I bet he would be a huge hit at Dragon*Con in some circles.
Perhaps the warning want warranted, but I don't know how filthy everyone else's minds are, in case such an image would scar someone or something.
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Figured I'd at least warn people in case they're squeamish...
Sooooo, two things. First is the...interesting phrasing used to describe her wings and stuff. purple veins and whatnot. Not that bad, but I hadn't noticed it before.
Second, this is the part I mentioned you should look out for (without actually telling you what to look for). Yes, first he swore off meat a book or two ago, then it was "if absolutely necessary" or maybe even "well, a little bit isn't that bad" kind of situation, and now this. This HAS to be intentional for some reason; there is no way PaoPao couldn't notice this after making such a huge deal about the vegetarian thing. Anyway...
Tying back to your comment about meat and homosexuality or gender...issues, possibly latent in the character: he's going on about a thick juicy piece of meat in his mouth, with its...juices dribbling down his chin. Again, perhaps it's nothing, although given the vegetarian thing, there is a lot of attention being drawn to it. But combined with your meat = male possibility, especially after the purple-vein prose... *shudder* I bet he would be a huge hit at Dragon*Con in some circles.
Perhaps the warning want warranted, but I don't know how filthy everyone else's minds are, in case such an image would scar someone or something.